oil on canvas
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Is there a place beyond the stars?
With no trace of cities or cars
Where light does not cast a shadow
And life's not so fast and shallow
Where there is just one tree of life
That forever grows free of strife
In all directions spiral out
The celestial branches about
Where each little leaf does unfold
So that creation can be told
And all the roots are intertwine
Across the parallels of time
With the right and wrong, meek and strong
Creating a celestial song
The pillars of creation grow
Out of darkness for light to glow
And will explorers one day find
Such a thing within a child's mind
And find the future and the past
And all the fusion and the mass
That lights the million suns of night
In life of little ones of light
For could we be beyond the stars
When we ponder within are cars.
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26 comments:
A very poetic appeal,
liked this one much, Nick.:)
We could perhaps pray for a better world, while we still ponder..
wishes,
devika
When times are hard I make my escape to such a place in my head.
Pretty deep poem indeed.
I often ponder these things. Well said, Nick. Beautiful painting.
interesting thought! (I love the picture!)
I LOVE this painting Nick.
Lots to think about in your poem...well put.
I think a similar place beyond the stars does exist.
Very fine shades in the beautiful painting.
lovely nick! :)
place beyond the stars? why not?! :) we could always dream of a better world whilst thinking so...
I like to think there is a beautiful place beyond the stars. Nice poem to reflect and ponder on - coupled w/ your lovely painting.
This is wonderful...and something I think about alot too..too much chaos and we need more peace and "trees" that are golden while shining their peaceful wisdom upon us.
Lovely pic, thought and writing Nick.
Blessings,
Rhi
"That lights the million suns at night" ...so poetic and beautiful painting.
Awesome Nick! Such thoughts are needed today, more than ever.
Beautifully written and painted, as always :)
Your paintings are so ethereal! And poetry to match. Such talent!
Yes a tree of life....we ponder in our cars...
This is very good Nick and the painting uplifting to my Spirit!
This is lovely poem and a lovely golden tree which bring us hope for a better day.
I bought a black tee shirt yesterday with Audrey Hepburns portrait on the front. It's beautiful pic of her face with her hair up of course. I got a short sweater shrug to match it. I thought of you as I made my purchase and when I tried it on at home...us both being Audrey Hepburn fans..:o)
Rhi
Splendid art piece. I can feel the healing rays. Just what I need on a cold, grey day. Thanks!
I Loved all of your poems and i really enjoyed the idea of linking art to poetry ! U are an amazing Poet and Artirst ! i paint and write poems my self but i'm just beginner ! U have an unlimitted Talent ! I Support
Beautiful...you have read my mind! I dream of such a place everyday. Such a perfect poem and artwork to match!
OH, this is beautiful, Nick...the painting and poem!
Perfect... beautiful picture besides.. :))
Take care
I love your painting very much.
Amazing!
thats going to be a dream... there are en number of people who wanders in such an imaginary world..
Long since you posted a poem, Nick..
hope all is fine with you,
and hope to see you posting :)
wishes,
devika
Lovely! There is a place for us, even if right now it is within our creative spirits..
I write also and edit, so forgive me for mentioning but last line "within our cars" not are?
Hey Nick....it's been a while since you posted. I hope all is well with you.
Love, light and peace,
Serena
I hope you are well.
Have a good Easter!
Don't know if i liked you poem more or your painting ! coz both are so good :)
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